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Beautiful ekphrastic poem! I love the excerpts from Vincent's letters and the tour of his biography as well as the way the poem comes home to roost within the parable not only at the end, but touches down for a moment in each stanza as well.

"I am often homesick for the land

Of paintings." is such a beautiful line and makes me feel so much kinship with Vincent. My brother who is a painter used to have as his voicemail a message to the effect that if he didn't answer his phone it was because he was probably lost in a painting.

"The molten sun poured its tactile gold

Over the violet expanse of waiting field,"

A vivid visual description. 'Tactile gold' is really lovely.

"his smooth gesture sure" is a phrase that really resonates, though I'm not even sure why.

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